Here is my entry for the Pudsey Library Writing Competition...
An Angel Returns to Pudsey
Having undertaken Pudsey’s previous semicentennial sweep,
Leon had petitioned hard to do this one, too; he’d fallen in love with the
little town.
Up here, on the rim of reality, he and his angel kindred had
no physical form, existing as energy, intention, light, but as he gathered
himself for the jump…
…and plummeted Earthwards, he felt himself change, solidify.
A body, limbs, hair… And, of course, the wings…
Atmosphere, the top of the skies. Newly acquired lungs sucked thin air, heart
pumping. The air thickened, his wings snapped out, and Leon laughed, his senses
soaring with joy. He angled his pinions
in for the drop Earthwards…
Three kilometres up, he slowed, stilled, hanging hawk-like
in the sky. Such change! The town had spread and sprawled outwards,
filling in the formerly-green fields. He
circled lazily, losing altitude.
Leon didn’t worry about being noticed. Humankind rarely looked upwards these days –
their lives weighed them down so much.
He extended his perceptions over the town… the mood was generally
upbeat… some people struggling, most doing well. The local tone was good.
He covered the skies, from Swinnow to Fartown, round to
Owlcotes and over Troydale, making sure all was well before landing stealthily
near Pudsey Park, sliding his wings away.
Leon glanced at his human reflection in the long library
windows. Tall and lithe, with
coffee-coloured skin and cropped, dark hair, his eyes brown and his nose
aquiline. He wore trainers, jeans, a
hoodie. Hmm… fifty years ago, he’d worn
a smart suit and proper shoes and a very different complexion. The world had moved on.
His last visit had coincided with the library’s
opening. State-of-the-art glass
frontage, sleek teak and fern wallpaper… he’d not been able to resist a look
inside. He envied humankind their books,
the massed stories waiting for release…
The interior had changed.
The wallpaper had gone, but still there were shelves with books and he
reached for one he recognised… Tolkien’s ‘the Hobbit’… A different edition, but
the same title. He cradled it, stroked its covers with long fingers, inhaled
its papery fragrance… Reluctantly
replacing it., he reached into the back pocket of his jeans, approaching the
counter where the librarian looked at him over her spectacles. He smiled.
Some things never changed.
He slid a tired paperback across to her. ‘Sorry,’ he said. ‘It’s a little overdue.’
I loved this Gill. I didn't think it was overly Pudsey-less. I like the description of the library and the ending!
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